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Flash Fiction (1.5k max word count)

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on: January 10, 2018, 04:19:05 PM
I have a flash fiction piece that I'd like beta readers for please, it has a 1.5k max word count and I am intended to enter it into an anthology (which has a deadline of May). I also will submit it for this month's writing challenge, but still fine with continuing editing after that.

It's currently titleless, and comes with the warning of mentions of self harm.

As for the feedback, i am fine with complete honesty, and I would like any and everything that's needed to be said. Especially cause the anthology I am submitting to is very hard to get into :P

Thanks :)


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Reply #1 on: January 10, 2018, 11:04:37 PM
I can take a look at it if you would like.

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Reply #2 on: January 12, 2018, 07:41:44 PM
Thank you! :)

I had a little bit of feedback from Kat, so I am just messing with it a bit first then I will send it over to you :)


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Reply #3 on: January 23, 2018, 05:16:29 AM
Ok so my revision of it took longer than I planned, but it's all ready to be looked at now :)

Will email in a sec, and thanks again @Rohierim :D


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Reply #4 on: February 10, 2018, 01:05:37 PM
I have a link to this piece as I submitted as my challenge piece, I'm still looking for some people to take a gander at it if possible :)

http://forum.worldsmyths.com/index.php?topic=1369.0